Critical but stable by Jean-Pierre Martinez

Critical but stable is a comedy by Jean-Pierre Martinez for 5 or 6 characters.
Raymond is in a deep coma following an accident on a Boris Bike. His long lost relatives are called to his bedside to decide what to do and avoid prolonged therapeutic interventions. But this collective decision becomes even more difficult when the patient turns out not to be who everyone thought he was. And is the keeper of a secret that could make everyone very rich…
French original title: Diagnostic réservé
Translation in English by Anne-Christine Gasc
Cast: 6 characters (male or female)
A play written in February 2014
A play created at Saint-Cricq Villeneuve, Salle des fêtes, the 11th of Octobre 2014
Translations:
in Spanish : Pronóstico Reservado (translation by the author)
in Italian : Prognosi riservata (translation by the author)
in Portuguese : Prognóstico reservado (translation by Jean-Pierre Martinez)
in Czech : Opatrně s diagnózou (translation by Jaromír Janeček)
The Price of a Life… According to Everyone’s Interests
In Critical but Stable, the character around whom everything revolves remains motionless and silent. His coma creates a void that the others fill with talk of compassion, responsibility and dignity. But the discovery of a possible cache of money alters the value each of them places on his survival. Every revelation reshuffles the alliances and turns a medical decision into a calculation over inheritance: the patient becomes simultaneously the subject of an ethical choice, a potential inheritance and an inaccessible safe.
Black humour thus lays bare the fragility of principles when material interests come into play. Family, medicine and the police continue to speak the language expected of their respective roles while pursuing less avowable objectives. The truly “reserved” diagnosis is therefore that of a society which claims to measure the absolute value of life, but in reality assesses it according to what it costs, what it may yield and what each person still hopes to gain from it.
Critical but stable, the song
Lyrics and music: Jean-Pierre Martinez
This song may be used, without obligation, as part of a stage production, upon simple request to the author and without any additional fees.
The audio file is available upon request, subject to prior authorization from the author for the use of the play’s text.
Book published by La Comédiathèque
ISBN 9782377052530/ February 2019
57 pages ; 18 x 12 cm ; paperback.
Price: 11 €
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